I still think the white is too overpowering. I’d like to see the white replaced by a time and then some white skid marks where she and others have skated. It’s just too stark right now. I love the crane since Aldo Leopold was responsible for bringing those back from the brink of extinction. Maybe another one taking off? Also, the bottom needs to fade under the ice. One things that would help with that is having some fish coming out from under the ice, cropped so to speak.And then let’s get to some shadows/shading on the figures. The ice, as well as color needs another character, I think.
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