Latest version of side 1 of the air bus. Still no sky color..that’s just the filler blue from the first ones. We’ll get there :)

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-Aly

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4 responses to “Latest version of side 1 of the air bus. Still no sky color..that’s just the filler blue from the first ones. We’ll get there :)”

  1. gannonned says :

    I like the variety of of tree shapes and the distance that’s developing. I also think the size variation of the clouds is working, but I still think the clouds will read better if they are lighter than the sky, at least on top.

  2. UWEC Hybrid Bus Design Project says :

    Please don’t forget to consider the vent(rectagular) areas on the back/sides of the buses where we cannot apply the design. I suggest removing that area now so you have a better idea how the whole composition is working w/ that part gone.
    JK

  3. Sooyun Im says :

    Nice variations of tree shapes here. but all the edges of tree branches are too cut-off. for the clouds, there are too many clouds here and top spaces are overfilled. I would like to see a little bit of breathing room(negative space) and it seems like the shapes of all grey clouds are very similar. it looks like same shape over and over with just different sizes….

  4. Sooyun Im says :

    nice to see motions here too from bended trees but the bend in the tall center tree is a bit too much.

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